In order to make final improvement and general feedback on Room 136 a pin up crit gave the feedback shown bellow. I also took this opportunity to make final design decisions on how best to show the refinement option, should the adjectives become underlined or disappear?
Feedback:
- Different weights for adjective rather than disappearing when a specialism is chosen
- Good colour scheme
- Contrast of orange and grey works well
- Effective typeface
- Colour scheme works well
- Layout is effective
- Animation is cool and engaging
- Words could disappear when specialism is chosen
- Love the head explosion/use of animation
- Typeface and simple aesthetic is refreshing
- Really like the animation
- Good colour scheme, simple and effective
- Contextually relevant name
- Good animation
- How long is the screen? are all of the students on one scroll? its an infinite scroll
- Rearranging adjectives is good idea
- When you click branding or graphic design the words should disappear
Upon reflection of the feedback above I plan to make the adjectives disappear when a specialism is chosen as the use of lines makes the website look too crowded and takes aways from the simple aesthetic. Furthermore I plan to animate the mix up feature so that users can see how the layout of the adjectives will change when this option is chosen. Overall the feedback was generally positive as students liked the use of the adjectives and self portraits as well as the ability for professionals to identify them through specialism.
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