Micro Music Genre: Feedback

Upon developing some more designs based on the hand motifs used within the pin badges I gained some quick feedback from one of my tutors before a larger group crit.

• doesn't fully communicate fan culture, hand doesn't transfer onto flag, worked better as badge 
• others more about Everton rather than fan culture and the music genre not relevant 
• focus on chants, encouraging fans to chant more 

Group crit feedback:
In order to gain feedback on my designs so far I decided to present all the ideas I had experimented with mainly focusing on the scratch cards and flag idea as these where the most plausible (see figures 1-2). 

• scratch of cards:
• can get ink to screen print with, silver 
• might be ale to print on top but not sure 
• show community as everyone would be involved 
• more engaging 
• flag:
• greater impact in exhibition 
• could pass the flag around fans, could they add to it 
• use the back of the flag
• one side communicates to fans other to opposition 
• could be massive
• something can be taken from the flag
• sticker 
• section of flag 
• Doesn't have to be material 
• paper 
• consider how to make engaging, how fans will interact with the flag 
• consider space within the exhibition 
• recreate home and away fans, two flags 
• opposite ends of exhibition 
• what do you want fans to do with it 
• as it goes through crowd does something change
• Bring back to clapping 
• what do you want people to do 
• perspective 
• what will fans get from the flag 
• bring home and away fans together 
• Audience:
• who will they be? 
• what will they take from the flag? 
• what will they do/interaction?

In order to respond to this feedback I plan to consider the audience and the key questions above such as how fans will interact with the flag and what will they gain from using it as I think these considerations is what's missing from my existing designs.

Figure 1

Figure 2